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"Had to let you go so I may live (acrostic)"
  by Tpoet


Entering into souls
Cavity living in a
Tube to small wondering why
One such as you never
Penetrated me whole
Indifferent is the minds
Capacity to think

Present you tried to be
Running a partial course
Ending to early you
Gave me hope
Never thought I would not get
A chance to meet you
Never hold you tight
Crying tears of a soul unable to live
Yearning for more time
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Date Submitted: Apr 23, 2009 (08:31 AM)
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  Poetic Lyricis...
05/14/09 (09:40 AM) 
This was very heartfelt--the emotion in this write just screams at you and there's nothing like poetry from the heart--stay strong--10stars

  Ewe Debe
05/08/09 (11:42 PM) 
Ohhhh honey!!! Love ya bunches huggs and huggss I'm sorry it took me so long to read this

  *~Raw Sensuali...
04/28/09 (08:59 AM) 
All I can do is hug you from afar...You remained so strong through all of that...and I kinda dropped the ball on checkin' on you... I'm glad you're writing it out... love you T

  J3LLYB3AN
04/25/09 (08:57 PM) 
everyone was right this makes you want to cry and yerr this is definitely extremely deep.. deff got me sad over here babesz.. but yeah you can see you put a piece of your heart in the piece hun and thanks for doing so and letting us in

  Quite
04/24/09 (02:29 AM) 
very nice mama and well put this was a deep and very profound write luved it and u may god bless u and urs

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