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"haha..."
  by butta pecan
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Gotta Tell Em by SlimCutta


first off...
you came at me in all the wrong directions..
i'm bout to rip in yo ass hole with this lyrical erection...
okay okay..
enough games have been play'd...
now its time for the real brick to be laid..
for the real shit to be sprayed..
i went easy on you at first, cuz i know that u have mental issues..
but enough feeling sorry for your ass, its time for me to really diss you...
you're supposed to be a grown ass man, but u hiding behind your computer screen...
i was gonna remain nice, but i see i gotta be mean..
i gotta be green...
BOY,
how old are u again? 22 right?
shouldnt you have a job instead of being in the chat rooms all night?
get a LIFE outside of GS..i notice you're not only here to write..
you're here mating, and dating, and perpetrating...
like those online preditors in the chat room waiting...
you couldn't man up and apologize...
too busy hiding behind lies...
trying to make your self seem better than who u really are..
i agree with the GAME, because you "wouldn't get far!"..
if
mommy
wasn't
sending gas money for you car...
can't even stand up to you little brother!
too busy crying and snitching to your mother...
it's pitiful.
but i have no sympathy for you...
if you got something to say to me, here's what u can do..
come find me, at the library, you know where i sit!
be a man, and face the fact that u AINT shit...
and u CAIN'T get...
on my level, because i have long surpassed you...
should've told the truth the first time i asked you...
i guess the truth really cut you deep...
bet my verse from that collab made you lose sleep...
until you finally built up the nerve to come WIT it...
im in FAMU's library..if you want it come GET it!...
you have NO social life outside of GS...
and all the things you tell these people on here is BS...
and i can name a few of your girls if ya wish...
hell, its so damn many, i had to make a list...
1. meachez
2.SLP
3.bigbooty
4.alize
5.yellow canary
6.itsnmysoul
7.IB
8.Crystal..you never even met her! ha!
9.miss T
and many MORE!.now u talk to ORGANIC! lmao. you're a WHORE...
let me remind you..dating aint what this site is for!
and when you get the nerve to face me...
you know where i'll be...
i'ma sit by the window in the library just so u can see me, G!..
and you should really consider seeing a shrink..
because being so caught up in the internet has affected the way that u think...
and i advise you get professional help..if not for yourself, do it for ur mom and dad...
having this alternate life on GS that is nothing like YOU..your real life must be sad...
and let me remind you..you're 22...so why wont you act like grown ups do?
get
it
together...
im through..


*if u wanna battle we can battle... theres ALOT more where that came from... get ur weight up u fake ass nigga. u nothing but a hypocritical church boy...you should stop playing with GOD... and SlimCutta, u know where i am.. be a MAN and confront me bitch!* u only mad at me because i let the truth be known about u and u just cant handle it...
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Date Submitted: Oct 02, 2007 (09:27 AM)
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  Teil
04/11/08 (11:11 AM) 
I am truely speechless!!!!!!!! I am afraid of u girl. But U gotta keep ya game up. Let em' know!!!!!! I feel this poem 100%. Do ya thang!!!!!10 starz!!!!!!!!

  ORGANIC
10/14/07 (07:17 PM) 
Well done. alot of emotion in this. ur word play was crazy. ORGANIC-

  Moziah
10/11/07 (06:59 PM) 
Dam...B. U reduced Ol Boy to his lowest common denominator. U know WE gotcha back. But You a Murda Mommy, you can melt dude dolo! Stay up babygirl. Uno!

  pepsi_colachik...
10/08/07 (04:12 PM) 
wow this is the first write i've ever read by u and when i mean u blew this shyt outta the water u recked this shyt for days to come! Mad ass props

  POPPY'S WIFEY
10/04/07 (05:18 PM) 
DAMNNN GURL YOU REALLY RIPPED THAT NIGGA... I BET HE WOULD KNOW NEXT TIME TO NOT RUN HIS DAMN MOUTH LIKE THAT AGAIN.... HE IS A FUCK NIGGA WITH NO LIFE... SO FUCK HIM AND MEACHEZ YOU DONT NEED THAT SUCKER HE AINT SHIT

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