This piece is really nice and the song compliments it quite well.Another well written Haiku style poem

Interesting turn how the submissive can also be captivating to the dominant. And oh yes ...what a phenomenon it is ...and what ensues, phenomenal it must be.

This piece touched me, really sexy. A man that can be submissive, has to be the sexiest man on earth. Good Job !!! Keep bringing it Lady ........................................... And thank you for sharing with us.

very nice structure good and the vibe is great

Powerful write...amd it is true...damn true...