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"hALF gONE"
  by BadBoyQD8


my mind set
heart blessed
do i still have a life?
yes
still here
no fear
gon kill me
i dnt care
gangsta?
me...naw i dnt think
but gettin money
yeaaaa....wink wink
but lately der ben problemz
y...i dnt no
lookin in my face
yea it definely dnt show
ive lost myself
mayb u can find me
i thought there was no u
but u was standin rite behind me
key 2 my problemz
n da key 2 my heart
u a 1st round pick
cuz dey fish n u my shark
i thought i was lost
but it must've ben my past
only witout u
im missin my otha half
couldnt c nuthin
so u gave me bac my eyez
couldnt feel nuthin
so u gave me a surprize
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Date Submitted: Aug 29, 2008 (10:32 PM)
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  --->ROXIE<---
08/30/08 (05:43 PM) 
HMMMM....I LIKED THIS BUT I THINK U COULDA ADDED A LIL MORE 2 IT...U KINDA LEFT ME WANTING MORE TOWARDS THE END...I LIKED THE PART WHERE U SAY "couldnt c nuthin so u gave me bac my eyez "...THAT WAS TIGHT

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