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"happiness in a bottle"
  by DEBOMILLIONZ


Happiness found in the shape of a bottle
Fogetting all my pains with each swollow
Seven day a week i need you more
So glass after glass i pour
No wife no fam no life
Just my juice to feel nice
Erasing the memorys of the fight
That night
We exchanged words
But i was so pissed nothing was heard
I grabbed her arms she started to cry
Didnt give a fuck only worried about i
Slammed her to the floor
Couldnt take it no more
Found myself kicking her in the rib cage
Everything hazy driving off rage
I wanted everything to just go away
All the naggin she did everyday
The being talk down to like her child
So her head i plowed
As i vowed
Never again
This will end
And then
I thought about what i was doin
And her frail body wasnt movin
Eyes wide open staring back at me
In them my reflection i see
Bloody hands and clothes too
I fucked up i didnt think this through
And couldnt think anymore
So i barried her body under the livin room floor
My soul is gone my mind is empty
All is left is this bottle and me
-debomillionz
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Date Submitted: Feb 10, 2009 (12:01 PM)
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  Drea s
06/28/09 (07:03 PM) 
IM LIKE SPEECHLESS...I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TO COMMENT ON THIS PIECE.......

  Ms. Lady T
02/13/09 (11:55 AM) 
o damn man.... this is crusial... there is nothing else 2 say...nicely done 10 stars- Ms. Lady T

  QueenAsia
02/13/09 (09:54 AM) 
"All is left is this bottle and me" but u can't buy happiness, it's free

  SoulofNY
02/11/09 (04:36 AM) 
You bruh this ish right here was off the chain i mean damn this is definitely a fav for me you got skillz with the pen son for real keep it moving real talk 1

  Sentinal
02/10/09 (02:55 PM) 
Damn bruh... this write is insane. The way you described it made it really easy to picture. 10s man

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