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"Hardcore Fellatio"
  by Laydii Lyric
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Dick Work 2 (Don't Bite if yoy Can't Chew) lol by Poetry Love


Relaxation becomes erect
from the
salacious sex
about to be delivered

allowing you to
double-dip delicious strokes
engaging in
hardcore fellatio
.
Heated
Ambrosial appetite
Ready for
Domination to be
Centered within
Oral obedience
Reaching
Explicit x-rated

Freakiness
Embracing sexual severity
Letting
Lusciousness lash
Anxiously across my
Tongue while I
Initiate
Orgasms
.
lips arched
and p.a.r.t.e.d.
into shape for tasting
human honey
dipped and re-dipped in chocolate-
.
melting
.
in
.
my
.
mouth
.
warmed by my lips
and-
my hips sway in gyration
at the way I
lay down the crown
favoring you like
hardened toffee

got you
wrapped around my
tongue
like phallic pinky promises

so intense
your waist and y face…
blend



So as far as any
“work”
put in…
point proven-
I win

(so lets stop the writing
and get back to biz)

*wink*

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Date Submitted: Apr 16, 2009 (03:52 PM)
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  Successful
10/29/09 (11:13 PM) 
sissy you is nasty for this one can i get a warning sign before i read this sick shit you is a nasty nasty woman you sick ass

  leethal
09/13/09 (04:00 AM) 
you have got a very sophisticated pen! this joint was off the chain. i'm jst glad that when poets like you leave me speechless, it doesn't effect my pen haha! 10starz

  XyahlinFierce
08/17/09 (04:26 AM) 
this is fuckin amazing. enough said :)

  Young Street P...
07/27/09 (12:40 PM) 
Got damn......wow i don't even kno what to say except .....ummm...yea felatio...good topic.....*winks*......good write sweetie.....10

  Phree
07/17/09 (01:37 AM) 
The intensity is so apparent. Love to read an erotic poem that draws me in. Nice use of erotica without vulgarity. Great read.

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