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"Hardened Cement..."
  by Afroditee
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Play-Doh by ...


i
took a piece of you?

(silly you!)

really,

deluding yourself,
thinking we were

w h o l e

representing solidity
with mundane elements
of unity,
where we once romped and frolicked
across the glades…,

though,
all i really wanted
was you

buddy,

for frenzied fucking
so i could cum

like a river;

i, ebbing and flowing
with the tide

laughter comically filling
my bubbling brook’s
nooks and crannies;

now,
your misbegotten tears
add saline pollutants to my
water’s edge

as you deem to control my
ebb and flow

with your dam restrictions!

all i ever wanted to do was to fuck you!

since then…

you been
playing the role of the ill-lucid
contortionist
all bent out’ta shape
and crying me a fuckin’ river

hand pathetically clasped to heart
and knees ignominiously bent,
as your heels make contact with
your ass,


wanting to remain the constant
source of my liquid moisture;

needing my purifying waters to salve
your self inflicted wounds;

vilifying me when i would overflow
and flood
your,
he and his’
bloody banks;

i can’t help it,
if subconsciously, I deem
your obsessive ness ugly,

….and your malleable ness
has gradually eroded your
contortionist spine…

me, thinking that we were
the like minded
playful duo,

free flowing liquid spirits...

hardened,

you,
taking the time to jus' bus’ a nut,
(even if I had to fake it…)

****
'Fro

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Date Submitted: May 09, 2008 (12:11 AM)
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  *Miss Toya*
11/16/09 (07:20 PM) 
well damn! what can i say except you came on strong...went in hard...and you kept it that way all the way until the end! " all i ever wanted to do was to fuck you! " WHOA!!! you told it like it is was and will be! very nice

  Lady Soul J
09/17/08 (06:13 AM) 
hah!! i love that you can take a different position on things than you normally do and STILL come out on top! amazing!

  Soule
06/02/08 (06:09 PM) 
Yikes Fro! *sigh* as always, cold and blunt! Love and miss your "Fro ness" ;)

  SlimCutta
05/27/08 (05:20 PM) 
LMAO..that last line...but wow fro..been a minute since ive been readin up on writes..and this is one of the first ones ive read since being back..and im glad i came back to this...whew...thanks for bringin me back into form..i loved how you went through this write...it made me feel back at home.

  Mz Prose
05/09/08 (06:02 PM) 
!!!!!!!!!! yes ... you kilt this ha@you been playing the role of the ill-lucid contortionist all bent out’ta shape ......................

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