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"Hard[Love]"
  by El Diablo


so far away from throwin' in the towel
boxin' a different kind of fight
yet similarities existing as the blows throw
hooks comin with the jabs
white flag's finally comin through

No more, me and you...

Then, I'm left in the ring...
no opponent in the clearing,
looking at love scattered amongst the stage
hater's proven answers starting to weigh in
heavyweights...knowing the verdict of the love before
it even can be saved, but...
she fell within those haters too,

In the end, how strong is I Love You?
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Date Submitted: Sep 03, 2009 (11:07 PM)
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  santiago\\\\\\...
09/03/09 (11:14 PM) 
your wordplay is sick in this piece and the imagery....a thing of beauty .... the length was perfect it was only meant to get your point across and let the reader know '' ay'!!! this is where it's at''.....keep it up...Santi' o and i would like to work with you on something when you get the chance...

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