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"Hate Me Now.."
  by SlimCutta


Hate Me Now..
Hate Me Now - Nas f. Puff Daddy

Hate me now or leave me be..
Dripping my lyrical pen on thee..
I shall never stop now..nor shall i falter..
Or fail in my walk up to this alter..
Sacrificing my own ink..
Sorry, you are the only weak link..
When you on top there is envy..
Or so Nas said..but thats just me..

Critically acclaimed to be opinionated ..
But im just me, just hated..
Cant stop nor will i stop writing..
Vibing to instrumentals or lyricists spitting..
Through my MP3..or off my CPU..
But you wont see me..but i see you..
My words are venomous..
Like the Cobra's but i dont bite but i write complete ferrous..
Iron that is..
If you didnt get it..then it is what it is..

Commentators..or haters..
Whatever you call them i take them to the level with letters.
Words and verbs and nouns..
Embarrassing all the so called poets named clowns..
I respect those who respect themselves..
Putting lyrics on shelves..
Only to be used against many others..
Leaving them covered in red gravy...smothers..

Hate Me Now..

Being the change that needs to be..
Someone needs to be the hero for others to see..
Is it you ..or is it me..
I cannot tell thee..
Up to the masses to decide for you and me..
Lyrics or lines..
Stanzas or bars....yours, ours and mines..
Just Hate Me Now..
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Date Submitted: Jul 12, 2008 (10:58 PM)
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  NINO
07/15/08 (10:50 PM) 
I was really diggin' this flow...comin' at us HARD with raw emotion. Excellent display of your skill right here

  MzSpoon aka "T...
07/12/08 (11:02 PM) 
You know what, I didn't know you had this type of poem in you! It's flow was rhythymic...and the words dynamic. The raw emotion of this poem is evident and I am standing applauding you, my man Slim!

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