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"HATER - PLAYER"
  by fr3$h P


To me, it's a small wonder, like vicki, why i'm picky
These niggas suck like hickies
And still get the shit they slip in like mickies
I'm sick of the hater-players, bring on the regulators
With the flavors like a farm team fucking with the majors
Like a river how i run through it, i do it so cold
Freezin up your bodily fluids, your style is old
You runnin your mouth, but don't really know what you be talkin about
You should retire, get that complimentary watch, be out!
Yo, with the quickness, so swift you miss this lyrical fitness
Now get this, these emcees wanna test me like litmus, bear witness
I'm like shot clocks, interstate cops, and blood clots
My point is, your flow can stop!
By all means, you need more practice, take that ass home
Everybody lookin at you, fish tanks and drome
In full effect, i stay catchin lyrical rep
And keep it blacker than the back of your neck
What you expect, that shit's hollerin
Cause we developin the followin
Gettin played like ?stones? off tapes and ?dollar vans?
I'll reverse you, universal, your demise is first
Before your rise gets worse
You need a night nurse like gregory, beggin me
Stop it hurts, what you say to me?
Like thats supposed to mean something
You don't wanna scene, frontin in the club
Your actin, i don't buy it, i got the dub
Come on everybody, come on and show your love
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Date Submitted: Jun 18, 2007 (10:42 AM)
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  Jay Jay sims
10/04/07 (02:18 PM) 
I like how you write you must be a rapper or something

  Leta Lea
10/02/07 (02:27 PM) 
Look Fr3Sh lol..Im run'n out of things to say already. Ya flow was krazy...and u got ya point across in the process. IT was well written.

  Dadazsugamama
09/24/07 (07:06 PM) 
I'M LUVIN' YUR' WRITIN' STLE..LUV2LUVU-LISAMARIE

  Dadazsugamama
09/24/07 (07:02 PM) 
U COMIN' WAY 2 HARD ON DIS' MOTHAFUCCA'...REAL SPIT..LUV2LUVU-LISAMARIE

  RUBY RED DBL R
09/23/07 (01:29 AM) 
that was nicely put together

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