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"Have You Ever..."
  by Barrack Obrian


*This isn't my normal style of poetry, but was the only way I knew how to express my feelings.*

Yo...
You ever love someone so much that nothin' else matters?
At that moment of time when the world's spinnin slower, but your hearts beatin' faster, weather its before the anger or after the laughter, but you still rather be with them 'cause nothin else matters?

When... your heart skips a beat 'cause your phone rings and you see the caller I.D. and it just happens to be...them?

When... the endless days aren't long enough and you long for their touch in such a way its not a want, but a must?

Or when you rush 'cause you hear that song that reminds you of them so you try to call, but your fumblin' your phone in your palm and by the time you call, the end of the song is long gone?

But what happens when that love is taken' away?

not 'cause its a decision made..., but rather a decision played... the wrong way so she's locked away for days.

Then those days turn to weeks, and the weeks turn to months and the months turn to a phase where you can't think of their face 'cause it brings tears your way like a blade cuttin' your hearts veins; love's knife...

And you say...

...nothin...

...'cause thats life...

I love you baby and your love will always last with me
so 'til you get out, I'ma hold it down for you like gravity
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Date Submitted: Feb 11, 2009 (05:56 PM)
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Date: 02/13/09 (03:38 AM)
Author: Darkfon
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comment icon  COMMENTS (11)
  B. Rose
02/20/09 (01:34 PM) 
Loved the way you ended tht yo... that was perfect and I can definitely relate yo...

  Quita0481
02/20/09 (03:38 AM) 
I like how you brought realness with this piece! Keep bringing it!

  DesireeMarie
02/13/09 (09:23 PM) 
Great write. Really could sense a twist bout to form "not 'cause its a decision made...but rather a decision played" And its really sweet that you're waiting for her. Great job!!

  Darkfon
02/13/09 (03:21 AM) 
nice write, its a nice start for valentines

  boheiman princ...
02/12/09 (08:23 PM) 
that was hot and so real! but that's really sweet for you to wait for her

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