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"He had me at Hello"
  by *~§Poetic§~*



I hopped on the train
on my way to work

He looked my way
With those honey hazel eyes

Had me soo mesmerized
I missed my dayumm stopp

Took me 20 fuckin mins to get to where
i gots to be

Crazii thing is he had to be the same place as me

Cooked up some conversation
and he was smellin so good

I usually like my men black
But he was SEXII
Vinilla so i wasn't complainin

Gave me that Jay'z line
Excuse me wuts ya name

I'm like he must be physic
cause i was think the same

Told him my gov. and he gave his
im like Kyle huh i'm really feelin
this kid....

then comes our stop
and he disappears
into a crowd of ppl

Still he had me at hello
now i'm think
where the hell did he
go....

Poetic..

Fallin - Mya -

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Date Submitted: Jun 22, 2008 (02:23 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (18)
  Shar
08/21/08 (09:31 AM) 
yo i really liked this one. very nice most def a 10!

  Sigmatic
07/17/08 (12:11 PM) 
(Snapping Fingers) Excellent piece. I can honestly say I really enjoyed it. It was smooth from the opening line to the last period. But you sorta left me hanging. I was expecting more. Like someone told a joke, but didn't give me a punchline. Overall ten stars. I definitely gotta add this to my favorite. Keep it up.

  koolaiid
07/13/08 (03:23 PM) 
ayeeeeeeeee this is hott. hott. hott. im lovin it. very amazing. "he had me at hello " =]

  Quite
07/10/08 (08:41 AM) 
A very interesting piece ma I luv the format it was amazing and beautiful just like the writter

  Angieeee
07/02/08 (03:27 AM) 
awww hellla cute though !

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