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"he is damaged"
  by ash_g


his past women,
they have succeeded
in damagin the one
that i want.
he is damaged,
so much that he won't
let me in,
won't give me the chance
to prove
that i won't do to him
what they have done.
he is damaged
but i want a chance
just one
but i feel too late
the damage to him
has been done.
it's no fun when the
one you want has
been damaged.
heart locked up
not given anybody
any chances.
he is damaged
and i don't understand
he is such a good man,
he is damaged but
still i wish he would
give me his hand and
let me show him
how i treat a man

♥ ash
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Date Submitted: Nov 18, 2008 (12:07 AM)
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  OGSoldier4God
11/18/08 (05:09 PM) 
surprised!

  angeleyes1
11/18/08 (11:48 AM) 
very nicely written and real talk we all get hurt to a point but we get stronger and make it keep them flowing much love

  mz_April
11/18/08 (12:25 AM) 
aww i love this write ma. i really do know how that goes. find the perfect guy and hes just so hurt and scared to let someone in

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