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"He Loves To Make Me Scream"
  by Chaotic Virgo
  - This Poem is a response to the poem "He loves when I GO Down" by Gina1982


You are my master
And I am your slave
Right up until
You took the juice that I gave
Right up until you cleaned out my freakiest of wishes
Exclaiming with lust how it was delicious
With a thought and a breath
I turned it and flipped it
Becoming the master of these deeds so illicit
My gaze keeps you frightened, silent and wanting
So different from the control that you were flaunting
But now its "My Turn"
Two words my only speech
Breath so close it burns
As my tongue comes unleashed
Licking and flicking the student begins to teach
Keeping you there… an explosion out of reach
My hands grab your thighs and I hold them up high
Twisting and bending your legs are like wire
Spreading you further to widen my desire
I don’t even lick you
Just get close and kiss
Passionate and long
I grant you your wish
I continue my assault on your most delicate flesh
Assuring you forever that this tongue was best
Your hips raise to greet me without your control
As your muscles contract and hot juice starts to flow
My hand seeks your breasts to join in the show
I twist on your tit
And nibble your clit
Sending you to shivering... orgasmic fits
And still I wont quit
Wont let up one bit
Not until I hear you scream....
Scream for my dick
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Date Submitted: Oct 15, 2009 (04:58 PM)
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  tngrl
11/09/09 (11:05 AM) 
.....................................................................................................................................................AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMG IS ALL IM GONNA SAY!!!! *RUNS OUTA ROOM TO TAKE COLD SHOWER*

  Damami2burs4ev...
11/05/09 (09:57 AM) 
WOW...I'll scream for it daddy...My dark knight love the freaky side...Made me have to go change my panties...

  Blayzn 10
10/15/09 (11:41 PM) 
WOW!! HELLA HOT!! this was one hot ass drop here!! Gina's shit was hot but hot damn, this was a wondeful explicit response!!! :)

  คว...
10/15/09 (05:21 PM) 
WOW.....one hell of an erotic piece to start out with...this was a great response to mine...and i absolutely loved the ending...very sexy write...with just enough detail and sensualness to it....you know its going on the list....loved it :)

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