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"HE MADE ME FEEL......................"
  by BLACK STORM


WE WERE SITTIN ON THE BROWNSTONE
SINGING MARY J AND METHOD(ALL I NEED) SONG.
HE TURNED 2 FACE ME AND SAID" IM GLAD U FEEL BETTER
AND IF IT WAS UP 2 ME I KNOW I CAN TREAT U BETTER"....I SAID "YEAH WHATEVA".....THEN HE SAID "BABYGURL U HITTIN DEM RHYMES" I TURNED 2 HIM WIT A (INNOCENCE SMILE) "LIKE U LYIN AND STOP PLAYIN KUZ IM GOIN THRU IT".....HE SAID GOIN THRU WHAT I SAID DON'T '' WORRY IT'S JUST BEEN AN LONG NITE"...


SO WE SAT
AS OUR THOUGHTZ JUST WENT THEIR DIFFRENT WAYS
I STARTED FEELIN HIM IN SOME TYPE OF WAY
SO HE TURNED MY WAY AND SAID BABY GURL COME THIS WAY......

HE TOOK MY HAND
LEAD ME TO A ANOTHA PLACE
WE ENDED UP BACK AT HIS PLACE
I SWEAR HE MADE ME FEEL LIKE WE WERE OUTERSPACE
WHERE NO NO DRAMA OR NOBODY CAN'T TRACE
I WAS DEFINITY GETTIN COMFORTABLE....

HE ASK ME IF I WAS GOOD
I SAID NO DOUBT
HE SAID AIGHT MA IMA GO TAKE AN SHOWER
SO I LAYED DOWN FINDING MYSELF THINKIN OF HIM
CRAVING FOR HIM,I FEEL LIKE IM GOIN THRU WITHDRAW
THINKIN OF HIM...DAMN HE AINT EVEN MY MAN AND HE GOT ME FEELIN THIS WAY.

SO AS I FELT A SOFT KISS
ON MY LIPS
I AWAKE 2 SEE HIM STANDIN THERE WITH AN TOWEL WRAPPED AROUND TIGHT WITH WATER GLISTEN HIS SKIN......THAT'S WHERE THINGS BEGIN.......
THEN HE PUT ON SUM SLOW JAMS
LISTENIN 2 THE SOFT MELODY OF LEVERT SINGIN(BABY IM READY)...I WAS HOT AND READY...
HE SAID RELAX BABY IMA TAKE IT SLOW AND STEADY
HE EASE ALL MY CLOTHING AWAY AS WE LAY
AND SWAY 2 SOFT BEATS
HIS KISSES PUT ME ON AN HIGH ECSTASY
HE CARESSES MY THIGHS
LOOKED INTO MY EYES AS I LET OUT A SMALL CRY
HE WHISPER IN MY EAR
(BABY DON'T CRY)
AND HE KISSED MY TEARZ AWAY......
HE HAD MY FULL ATTENTION
I FELT A PASSIONATE CONNECTION
I HOPE FOR NO DISTRACTION
ALL I COULD THINK OF
I NEVER BEEN TOUCHED LIKE DIS
I NEVA BEEN KISSED LIKE DIS
I NEVA KNEW IT FELT LIKE DIS


SO HE GRAB THE LOTION
MOIST MY SKIN IN SLOW MOTION
HE SAID RELAX................................................................
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Mmmmmmmmm is all i could let out
AFTER THAT WE PASSED OUT!!!!!!!!!


ps.....LOL.......ANYONE WHO THOUGHT WE WERE ABOUT 2 GET INTO SUM STICKIN YALL NASTY.LOL
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Date Submitted: Sep 21, 2007 (10:18 AM)
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  Rella-Roo #1
09/28/07 (08:31 AM) 
great poem i thought it was really good. so I have to say very good 10 starz for u.

  RUBY RED DBL R
09/27/07 (01:43 AM) 
I'm not nasty your poem was so well written the anticipation leading up to the end made me think you was going to get it in......... nice poem

  monica
09/24/07 (12:01 PM) 
this was a very beautiful poem i loved the way it was writing i was so deep in the poem i really didn't want it to end

  Tragic
09/24/07 (12:11 AM) 
ohh yyyyy did u stop i was waiting 4 de part where i took of my bra and undies and held his head while he suck on my nipples and i let out a moanful cry yadda ydadd yadda yadda...lol...but u had 2 stop lol....still sexy though-10- ma

  B. Rose
09/23/07 (11:21 AM) 
Im not gon lie... I did...lol.. but reguardless it was hot

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