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"He said he loved me..."
  by Dimplez


Texts sent with no replies,
unanswered phone calls,
cries that ring out into the night,
echoing through thin walls.

Pleas telling him that I need him,
hoping we could just talk,
but even begging him,
doesn\'t even seem to be enough.

Broken promises and tall tales,
disappointments by the day,
constantly trying to prove to him,
that I want him to stay.

No forgiveness, no trust,
and forget is not in his vocabulary,
yet all these things still fade away,
whenever he calls me baby.

I\'ve given up everything for him,
hoping to become the woman he needs,
but when I sit back and think,
I ask myself, what has he done for me?

It as simple as it\'s going to get
he didn\'t even have to do much,
he said all the right things,
plus he said he loved me, and that alone is enough...





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Date Submitted: Oct 25, 2009 (12:31 AM)
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  iLadyro.com
11/02/09 (09:52 PM) 
WOW!!!! Ms.Lady that's all that I can say about this piece. 10starz.

  G.A.
10/29/09 (08:52 PM) 
damn!... i completely agree with WJ Lyric dont sell yourself short just leave his ass cuz he just usin those three words to change everythin into somethin that make it seem like everythin is ok which it aint... nice drop the emotions here were real

  ButterflyDream
10/26/09 (11:53 AM) 
awww...damn dimplez,I feel these words....I have so been here before.You expressed deep emotions so well here,niceely done.

  HeblessedMe
10/25/09 (11:40 PM) 
I\'m feeling every line for i was on the other end of your pen! i relate and this was emotionally impresive

  --->QUEENPIN O...
10/25/09 (01:07 AM) 
ah...this is somethin that i relate to....so very much....

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