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"He Said....I Said....."
  by nikki g


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He said...."hello baby and how are u"

I said ....."I am good but I waited on u"

He said...."I am sorry I lost track of the time"

I said..."yeah I bet that I didn't even cross your mind"

He said ..."come on now don't be mad"

I said...."Oh I am not only a little sad"

He said..."Okay now I feel bad"

I said...."don't it'll pass"

He said....."But hey I will be there later on"

I said....."Great of course I'll be home"

He said..."Oh baby I got to go I'm running late"

I said..."okay sweetie don't forget our date"

He said...."I Love you more than you'll ever know"

I said (to myself) I wonder if that is what he is telling that other ho...."okay baby I Love you to"

He said...."bye"

I said..."yeah bye to you too."

Listen to the hiden message, to all what was said. Everything he said and everything she said. Is there another and he thinks she don't know, or is she waiting to catch him with his ho. I tell all men never under estimate a woman's power, she reads your mind most of the time, she sees in your heart from the very start, she knows what you want, she knows what you think. So even though she said bye too, he just don't know bye means we are through..............
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Date Submitted: May 31, 2008 (12:36 AM)
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  Sweetest Sin
09/07/08 (01:03 AM) 
i love the conversation yu created a perfect landscape to the foundation loved it

  KD the King
09/07/08 (12:35 AM) 
a womans intuition is a scary thing for an nhonest man. Good stuff you setem up and knockedem down outstanding job

  paulthatbeme
05/31/08 (11:38 AM) 
loved this piece...10+

  jaypaper
05/31/08 (03:34 AM) 
thats pretty deep but guys aint the only ones that pull all that stuff

  Michae-Angele
05/31/08 (01:07 AM) 
i love the concluzion, you summed it up real sweet! much propz 2 u, michae-angele

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