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"..he starred as superman"
  by 11th Wonduh


freeeee...free
f
a
l
l
i
n
.
.
summer
breeze
aerodynamically
dividing the skyline
w/ my descending
physical
.
freeeee...free
f
a
l
l
i
n
.
polluted soul inhibited
angst, demons w/ an inability
to be exorcised
human expectation
physical
defyin' gravitational physics
.
lithium, xanax capsules
is a helluva a
legalized drug
.
ascension w/ celestials & immortal gods
observant as they
telescopically watch f/ stratuspheric
thrones
.
lithium, xanax capsules
is a helluva a
legalized drug
.
insufferable bouts w/ depression
bipolar dysfunctional
coerced by a diminutive voice, an extirpator
w/ insurmountable rage
.
persuading me to voyage off of the edge
angrily he said, "go head, have a convo w/ the creator.
in your darkest seconds, he ain't here
to save you,
i am."
.
lithium, xanax capsules
is a helluva a
legalized drug
.
polluted soul, longing to experience
beautiful freedom
despondent, freeing your soul circumvents
societies ills
.
reverts to abstract stages of childhood
imaginin' he was superman
til he swan
dived

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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 (12:33 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/23/08 (10:50 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Snugasaglove (...
11/18/08 (12:44 AM) 
Your P.O.V. and language in this subject is on-the-edge-of-your-seat RIVETING!---An instant FAVE.---Read like a short story w/a beginning, middle and end...And what an ending! WOW!

  BIG CHIEF
07/29/08 (01:55 PM) 
**lithium,xanax capsules is a helluva legalized drug** so true..and the ending very sad but...it's reality...

  D.O.X.
07/24/08 (01:24 PM) 
damn...at the ending.....lol....you know you are one hell of a story teller

  Mz Prose
07/23/08 (10:29 PM) 
damn ... lithium, xanax capsules is a helluva a legalized drug ... u know being in the field I am I appreciate that line

  Disoriented Di...
07/23/08 (12:57 AM) 
wow it was sad and u sealed withthe ending the repitition just accentuated the scribe.

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