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"He used to love me"
  by Planted Daisies


He used to love me (SC Monday Challenge)

He was the center of my world
My life
My love
My faith
My fortress
Keeping me forever strong
The one that with love
Helped me create three kids
The pride and joy of our family
The one I held forever dear
The one who used to comfort my tears

He used to love me
Everyday and every night
But deep inside my mind felt so much fright
Fame and glory got in the way
Many nights I wanted him to stay
My bed began to get lonely and cold
My heart cried, I wanted him for my own

Deep inside, I knew he wasn’t mine
Deep inside, even though I was his wife
I felt he warmed another bed
I felt, another’s arms he now held
I wondered what I ever did wrong
To have my bed grow so very cold

He used to love me
But now he’s not here
He used to love me
But now he’s not with me
He used to love me
But now he loves her
He used to love me
But his death has left me alone

Who would have thought
I would walk away
I didn’t have to
Cause his mistress caused his death
He used to love me
But our children is all I have left
Cause I still love him
Even after his betrayal….

Planted Daisies2009

“The saddest thing in the world, is loving someone who used to love you” -Anonymous
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Date Submitted: Jul 11, 2009 (01:15 AM)
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Date: 07/11/09 (01:16 AM)
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  ash_g
07/12/09 (05:05 PM) 
damn.. i agree with Chainz. completely..i know how it feels to love someone,when their love for you isn't their anymore..i just went through this..great write and a fave.. -♥ ash

  Chainz.
07/12/09 (07:50 AM) 
last stanza was deep.. flows on point and the writes just plain good.. 10 stars

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