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"" He Walked Away""
  by HoneySuckle
  - This Poem is a response to the poem She Walked Away by Sigmatic


I gave my love to him he didn’t seem to care when he saw my tears, he said nothing.
He walked away….

I walked behind him explaining that I wanted no other; he was my all, my feeling. Still he said nothing

He began to walk away…

I told myself that I would be okay and bleeding heart would heal itself.
But when I got no comfort from my poetry I knew that my heart had reached its end.

I told him that I loved him and I would give anything to have him back in my life.
He walked farther away…

I felt my world stopped when he turned his back away from me.
I walked away...

The next day I didn’t see him my soul began to hurt as I carried on through the day.
Can’t I keep love in my life? What’s wrong why won’t he stay?

As I turned the corner to go to class my heart stopped and tears began to fall from my face.
Everything seemed to be unstable nothing in the right place.

The lights went dim and my mind stopped thinking as the lights got dimmer than dim.

There he was with his lips on hers, my best friend Kim….
I than said nothing
I walked away…
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Date Submitted: Jul 15, 2008 (08:57 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/15/08 (03:50 AM)
Author: Phirst Phoenix
Poem Title: TURN AROUND!!!

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  Stoykes
11/22/08 (07:37 PM) 
now this is jacked up. i'm not so sure about the 'i said nothing' part, but the walking away was the perfect move. i think i might of caught a case that day....nah, he wouldn't of been worth the drama. nicely done.

  Phirst Phoenix
11/15/08 (03:42 AM) 
The poem itself is deep, but the situation is sad. I can appreciate that you were able to convey these emotions with simplicity... but I have to respond...

  RainySky
08/06/08 (12:59 PM) 
dag I 'm feelin this for you see he walked away on me too. Tear jerker. 10 starz

  SikkWitIT
07/16/08 (01:02 PM) 
DAMN..............SPEECHLESS........CONCEPT IS PERFECT, WORD IS PERFECT, ATTENTION 2 DETAIL IS PERFECT. THIS IS A 10 & A FAV

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