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JaZzipOo Heal my Wounds
by JaZzipOo

I got bruises so deep
if I’m not careful I’d bleed to death
Because I love you so much that it hurts
I have scars
that are internally crying
My heart weeps damage,
emotionally we’re dying
And if you listen close enough
you’ll hear my insides sighing
Trying to catch its breath
Because every time I inhale
my pain exhales
So I crumble to my feet
because my legs are just too frail
I love you to death
and it’s killing me literally
Because our hearts don’t beat simultaneously
And no matter how close
I try to come by your side
your love will never coincide with mine
And at this point
bandages won’t even heal my scars
Love cuts deeply
And I’ve become your deeply rooted tragedy
All I want from you is for you to
hold my hand a little tighter
Because for some reason
I just can’t let you go
You’re like my crutch
I can’t stand on my own
And I know that loving you is wrong
But I rather not be right
Because this pain in my chest
is unbearable without you
But I’m too far from your grasp
I can’t even hold on
You’re like my medicine
I don’t want you,
but I need you
Without you I’d be sick
And I am
My heart is sore from this thing we call love
And I have soars so deep
if I’m not careful I’d bleed to death
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Published: Dec 22, 2009 (01:05 AM)
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12/22/09 (01:45 PM) 
This is a really great piece of writing. First and last lines are amazing; powerful words. But every line was so emotional and beautifully written. Love is such a complex and powerful emotion. It can make you feel unbelieveably happy, or in pain beyong belief. Great piece anyways.

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