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"Healthy Narcissism"
  by rhymeslikedimes


So if I say I'm different,
that makes me the same?
It's all about the approach
you take to the game.
Gotta be on top;
everyone's "destined" to shine,
but if we all got the same dream
it seems like a waste of time.

I suppose it would seem that way,
of course, if you're not me,
because I got the world at my fingertips
just wait and see.
Let me clarify that I don't shine,
baby, I glow...
with inner confidence only a few know.
I radiate change--
for the better--within,
my demenor can be toxic
like tonic and gin.
My style is superior;
my intellect: unsurpassed.
May be slow on the track but
I'm way to quick with the wit to finish last.

Sure I'm not famous;
ain't got the money,
but I have determination
and plenty of time, honey.

So remember the face,
remember the name,
because while you're losing.
I'm creating new rules to this game.

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Date Submitted: Nov 18, 2008 (12:38 AM)
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  B. Rose
11/23/08 (03:52 PM) 
Thats whats up ma... the confidence is oozing out of this without being too vain yo... i like this... nice job...

  stayfocus3d
11/19/08 (04:32 AM) 
me n u both shorty...lol

  Docc
11/18/08 (11:13 PM) 
i lyk dis ma i lyk dat swagg dat u got go ahead ma say u got it imma wait nd see na mean keep it up on da real

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