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"HEARTBREAK HOTEL"
  by porkchops


THE DEEPEST EMOTION LOVE...OR LACK OF
just when i thought everything was fine and going well...
it all happen again i checked back in to heartbreak hotel
the lights are all grey
and a sad song play
hi spirits and hope is a lack
every window is painted black
the big wood doors at the front are internally locked but so easy to enter
floor boards squeak and groan and full of splinters
the wall paper has peeled spider webs are there
no sheets or pillows mattresses are bare
the dining hall dinner serverd no more then water and peas
except on fridays water and cheese
two pictures posted mona lisa with a black eye love struck....i guess
a lion with a gash in his chest is that a broken heart....yes?
it must be a curse upon me my love wonderland
dissolved and disappear in heartbreak hotel i stand
it hurt so much some people sadly resides
i always want to leave so hard i tried....im deep inside
is my current residence permenent
cupid was never sent...and for love i am not meant
so all those in love i wish you well
i am a lifetime member of heartbreak hotel...
.
...
.....
...
.
as tear drops fall it quickly builds puddles on the floor
it flow under the door a small stream
more sadness arise without you girl
i really need you on my team
i try to imagine why
the harder i t r y
the more i c r y
rivers of emotion will never go dry
hurt depression pain
suicidal ideas i gain
all drip drop
falling like rain
i need surgery to remove you
from the depths of my brain
you lingerine on my mind
you driving me insane
how can so much pleasure lead to so much pain
i got an icebox where my hear use to be it can freeze hell
i guess there is nothing left for me to do
as the room flood with blood so long HEARTBREAK HOTEL

~*~*~*~ NOTE TO MY READERS ~*~*~*~
> FIRST THANKS FOR READING
> suicide is not a way to solve your problems mentally or physically
> can i get some comments over >>>> about my work please
> THANK YOU AND COME AGAIN - PORKCHOPS
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Date Submitted: Aug 17, 2007 (12:13 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 01/28/08 (09:44 AM)
Author: porkchops
Poem Title: HEARTBREAK HOTEL 2

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comment icon  COMMENTS (14)
  angeleyes1
09/21/08 (03:37 PM) 
very beautiful write the emotions pouring down the page keep flowing much love

  mz_April
09/21/08 (06:31 AM) 
this was an amazing write from u once again kitty baby *wink* damn i think i gotta suscribe now cuse u talenteded!

  MurkBoi
09/09/08 (06:07 PM) 
nicely done itz hot i'll give it 20 but itz only 10 starz nice write bruh

  ♥Poetic~...
08/03/08 (01:36 PM) 
damn the heartbreak hotel is a place many of us visit, "the big wood doors at the front are internally locked but so easy to enter" that says so much. i liked the comparison. 10** loved this one so gonna read part 2. the emotion in this piece was great....

  L!L M!ZZ ST@XZ...
08/01/08 (08:17 AM) 
omg this poem was excellent the concept was so very creative original and different and this reminds me of that song HEART BREAK HOTEL by Kelly Price,Whitney Houston &Faith Evans keep up the good work 10 stars and a fav YaDiGg

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