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"Held Tight"
  by Brokenvegtable
  - This Poem is a response to the poem If I Could Feel You by BrEeZyWrOtE


For now words
Are
All
I
Can
Give
The blanket around your shoulders
Keeping you warm at night
I want
Nothing more
Then to hold you tight
Make all the dark
Disappear
And let the light
Return
To
You
Covet you
Warm you
Keep you safe
As my arms
Wrapped around you
Like words in your ear
My voice
So gentle
So kind
My compassion
Breathtaking
Taking your
Breath
Away
Leaving you
Helpless
But to want me near
As if
I was your heart
And the best
You feel
Is the beat
Of my chest
Because
You
Make
It
So
Letting me know
You want to be
Forever held
You
Snuggle up
Close
Not letting the heat
Escape

I look into your eyes
And from what I can see
There is now
No reason
For you to have
Any
Tears
Never
Any
Fears
Not
One
Doubt
In
The
World

Just me
Holding you
Tight
With my words

My love

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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2009 (05:39 PM)
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  floatingonthev...
11/11/09 (10:09 PM) 
This is really beautiful and the background is so beautiful too... I just love the layout of this and how it reminds me of a perfect love poem or at least the perfect love poem you want from someone.. This really kind of left me feeling like I was sliding down a puffy cloud of love and landed somewhere warm and beautiful... I love this.. I am faving this write...

  BrEeZyWrOtE
11/01/09 (05:50 PM) 
Wow...I'm speechless. You really took my breath away with this response. This says exactly what I've been wanting since august 8th. Being held tight again and having no reason to cry or be scared. Such a disappoint I can't have him near...even if he's mad at me. Beautiful

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