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""HellCat""
  by LadyEvyl


2-24-2009
"Hellcat"

A gentle brush of
Your fingertips across my skin
Sends me softly stirring

Inner kitten starts mewling
While my knees turn slowly to water
Pulse beats increase expotentially

A slight gasp from the electric shock
Of us together
Body moistens in readiness

Little moans stir from my soul
Quivers and quakes begin
Hands cupping ever so softly

A breeze could be stronger than
You right now and still
I nearly cum on the spot

That voice a husky rasp
Sends shivers down my spine and
arrows to my clenching sex

Mouth nibbling on a tender ear
Or the too sensitive nape of neck
Ripples flooding me rapidly

Slowly, sweetly.. seductively
You trace each inch of
My skin

Stroking here or there
Tingles blazing everywhere
Creamy pot stewing

Hot little sounds
Signaling you win
As my knees give way

Trembling as I cum
with just the softest touch
To my clit and between those wet folds

Mouth suckling spirals
Fingers plucking my strings
Your sexed up puppet

Hoarse cries as my explosion
Slides on and on.. and on.. and on
Urged continually by you

Your voice, your hands, those magic lips
Shaking, soaked in my own juices
Thrashing wildly, sobbing

Insidiously you move
Sliding in triple slow speed
And out in the same way

Fingers aching to claw you madly
Uncontrolled passion let loose
And still you drive it s-l-o-w

Convulsing hotly in hard waves
Ripping nonstop moans from me
I float in bliss

A guy's wet dream of a woman
So gone in her passions she
Is a bedroom hellcat

All heated flowing cream pooling
Richly beneath her shaking body
Making each slowed down motion liquid heaven

Striking core deep with that rocking of your hips
I cum. And cum. And cum. And cum. And cum. And cum.
Unable to dam this tidal wave, sounds echoing off the walls

And still you won't let it go
I become a breathing orgasm
Unable to do anything but climax endlessly

A butterfly brush across a nipple and
I start shaking all over again,
Gushing hard, so hard the breath stutters
In my lungs

A sweet hot loop back
Keeps me submerged in
This sexual overload

Until a palsied collapse
Takes place
Still shuddering and gasping
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Date Submitted: Feb 24, 2009 (08:05 PM)
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  da black princ...
03/02/09 (08:52 PM) 
Damn, i had to stop reading because it was just too much for me right now, but I really did love it (cool)

  Jenesis
03/02/09 (03:16 PM) 
ooooooohhhhhhh this was a great piece yo...i love how you combined this erotic with darkness and you managed to use your creativity, that's what i love about erotic...you have COMPLETE FREEDOM and i love how you grasped that freedom...this was a great piece...keep the pen flowing 10 starz hellcat =)

  Amazing E.D.W
03/02/09 (01:40 PM) 
Whoa...call the fire department. This is outta control. From top to bottom you layed this one out very nicely.

  mingmei
03/01/09 (11:10 PM) 
very uniquely written erotic poem...sensual n seductive...10strz

  123notit
03/01/09 (08:19 PM) 
I would make a lite joke here but this doesn't deserve to make a joke of it. It was a great write very how you say "hot?" 10 starz if not more.

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