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"Hello"
  by BabyBoySpik


Was it love??
Or did I lust??
Her Beautiful caramel complexion
Lovely figure
Eyez so sexcii nd skin so smooth
Jus thinkin in mii mynd, wutz mii next move
"Hello," Nothin complex
And a simple hello iz wut she said next..
Seein her for the first tym, nd also the onlii tym
But can still pikture the moments tht we spent together
Shared stories nd shared laughter
Pure happiness between her nd I
Nothin sexual, but just as stimulating
Nd at first it was so intimidatin
"Iz she gonna lyk me" or "Iz sumthn suddenly gonna come up"
But lucky me, I guess I was somewhat captivating
Her in my eyez??? I would say fascinating
She jus had that allure, that appeal, that attractive feel
But not on purpose
It was her character, an I was a part of her storii
Just a couple of pages, but it was amazin
Thankfullii thingz turned out okaii..
Tempted to see her the very next daii
But it didnt quite workout tht waii, nd itz straight, im not trippin..
She had me filled wit lust
Somethin of which I can get over
Im not one to love so quickly
But at least I kno the difference
Love at first sight
To me thtz nonexsistent
..........
Well now ima go on about my dayz
Just waitin for another beautiful young lady to stroll mii waii
So I can simply saii,"Hello"
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Date Submitted: Jan 26, 2008 (12:41 AM)
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01/27/08 (10:57 PM) 
Was it love?? Or did I lust?? Her Beautiful caramel complexion Lovely figure Eyez so sexcii nd skin so smooth Jus thinkin in mii mynd, wutz mii next move "Hello," Nothin complex And a simple hello iz wut she said next.. <---i feel what u sayin....but work on ur form and it'll really bring out this piece....mad love fam

  BrookeTanner
01/27/08 (09:13 PM) 
i liked this write i dont know why it was a simple word and explained how much it meant to ya i liked this write i give it 9 stars keep writing from the heart it always flows betta *return the love *

  *SaVaGe*
01/27/08 (09:09 PM) 
Hahaha..i like this one hella dope... i gotta agree with thm to it was hot.. lol 10 starz

  Mesha_mi
01/26/08 (04:52 PM) 
thats hot now about the comment above i didnt know err dude had enuf brain to let this go thru their mind

  Sincero
01/26/08 (12:58 AM) 
yoooo.. this is dope.. deffinately feelin this one.. no homo.. lmao.. but forreal, it was hot.. this is like.. wut goes through erry dudes minds wen they meet a female.. it was hot how u aint have it get "sexual" but still "stimulatin".. 10 stars automatic bro!

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