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"Hello"
by J@yBoogz

I…
…Wonder
If…
…She
Even…
…Realizes
That my heart
Skips beats and my mind
Takes off
On an adventurous
Race through time, space and
Infinite realities as my pulse
Speeds its pace
Like a hamster’s heart rate on a
Turning wheel leaving me a
Bit faint with sweaty palms
And rosy cheeks--
Fumbling for the
Right words to use in reply
Without sounding stupid
All the while
Tryin to keep my composure
In front of her
From…
…A
Mere…
...Simple
Hello...?

ThugLuv Poetry y'all

	Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2008 (02:43 PM)
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**HOLLA**

10/16/08 (06:59 PM)

WELL GEE LET'S SEE ROXIE... WHO COULD HAVE INSPIRED THIS... LET'S PLAY HANG MAN... _ A_I_W_E_... MAYBE???? IDK!!!! LOL, THIS WAS DOPE ASS...

--->ROXIE<---

10/13/08 (04:08 PM)

U FRIGGIN SENSITIVE ASS BIOATCH!!! LOL...U DIDNT HAVE PROBLEMS SAYIN HI 2 ME WHEN WE MET U FUCKER DORK...LOL...JUST PLAYIN...WOW THIS WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL WRITE...I WOULD LOVE 2 KNOW WHAT INSPIRED THIS

*JazISweet*

10/11/08 (12:13 AM)

Hi ;-)

Arcane

10/09/08 (04:32 PM)

**sigh** This so beautiful J@y.. " ...She Even....Realizes That my heart skips beats and my mind Takes off On an adventurous Race through time, space and Infinite realities as my pulse Speeds its pace"<<---I didn't know I could make you feel like that...ctfu.. Let me stop lying before GS thinks I'm telling the truth, but truly, you have such an amazing talent, your words always get to me..

piss a mofo of...

10/09/08 (03:12 PM)

Maaaaaan, i like this backdrop and after reading this piece once again i am awstruck by the fuckin skillz you've got in your pen and the mind that manifests them!!

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