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"Hello for the second time W/ audio"
  by Insatiable.vessel


hello.wav - IV

yo it took about half a year to forget you...forget us...forget this whole thing...
That's 196 days that I spent broken hearted and bitter sweet.
4,704 hours that I didn't get any good sleep...
282,240 minutes that i questioned why me?... why we??
And i know breakups are never fun, but we just couldn't be... you started talkin about children and raisin a family...
honestly I just couldn't see it.
our children would be named 'Regret' & 'Heart-ache' and both of their middle names would have to be 'Mistake'
Because children right now would be just that… Cuz i'm not ready to bear your children, and you're not fit to be a dad...
Think of the kind of future we would have...
Regret always crying and throwin horrid fits, while Heart-ache all by herself mischievously and quietly sits.
Not a day of rest would go uninterrupted and inevitably our relationship would be corrupted.
We…Can’t…Be…
It took me about half a year to realize that…
196 days to come to terms wit the fact,
4,704 hours to see that this blissful love just won’t last
And 282,240 minutes to see that I can’t love you like that.
Can’t love you the way you want to be loved, I gave you my everything. I see that wasn’t enough.
So now we must sever ties, and whisper our goodbyes…and just take with us all of the good times.
The I love listenin to you laugh times
The where have you been all of my life times
The thank you for bein by my side times
The wiping my tears at night times
The if loving you is wrong I don’t wanna be right times!..
And we’ll go on living our lives
And maybe in the future if again we meet…
I’d hope that you’d at least acknowledge my presence…
Nothing elaborate or extravagant…
We’ll call it “hello” for the second time.
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Date Submitted: Aug 29, 2008 (01:06 AM)
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  RedLoveSong
09/24/08 (06:28 PM) 
Wow, I'm speechless...too bad I couldn't hear the audio. This is a favorite by far. Such originality and creativity. Thanks for sharing!

  Kentucky Kid
09/04/08 (02:40 PM) 
I have to say this is without a doubt one of the best writes i've read on this site. I'm with Soul Lyrikal,the words haven't been created yet to comment this piece.

  ♥Poetic~...
08/29/08 (08:29 PM) 
WOW! IV you killed this one. as I was listening to this i kept thinking of Harmony "did you calculate this" but now that i get to indulge in the words, i realize that when you're really in love and trying to get over someone you KNOW these things. so im feeling this piece needless to say. you sick w/ the pen for sure. a fave for me

  sexiiichik411
08/29/08 (07:12 PM) 
yo this was hot i love the way yu did it and mad me tihnk about sometihng in the pass but it was good keep it up -J@zZ!!-BoO

  leezymleezy
08/29/08 (04:54 PM) 
yea I love your voice too...but the poem is very well put...im diggin the fact that you really highlighted how long its been....very nice

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