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"HELL'S UNHOLY ONE"
  by THE GOD WAR-CLOUD


Sadistic's inbred
Half dead cloned bemoaning drone
Is nothing more than just some terrible botched debacle
Un-miraculously brought to life
Depraved horrible mistake simply gone wrong

Was somehow found out and brutally captured
Tortured and raptured
Forced to write his last poem
Before being mistreated
Broken and beaten
Begging for his crucifying persecutors to finally carry him home
Murmuring burying me alive
At Hade's rusted gate
Where lowly's loathing lonely roam
So that primitive's decay eating
Sharp-tooth grave digging creatures
Can arise from defeating's dreadful black catacombs
And lick the rotten fresh from his hideous un-wholesome bones
While still holding true to his own

.............Screaming dark subliminal phrases

Stating over and over...............

Allow this weeping
Almost sleeping soon to be deceased
Branded beast to slowly cease from breathing
Releasing grieving's constrained tumultuous pain
Then let the rest of my insane profane discarded remains
Be washed away by reason's seasonal's refreshing torrential rain
Leaving only the vain bloodstained memory of horrid's most blemished
Blasphemous begotten forgotten son

Known to this too cruel savage world
As Hell's Unholy One.......................



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Date Submitted: Oct 28, 2009 (10:57 PM)
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  ButterflyDream
11/03/09 (06:22 PM) 
oh....God War-Cloud this was an amazingly,descriptive write!This pulled me in and held me hostage,nicely done:)

  ndependent
10/29/09 (01:28 AM) 
most of your poetry leaves me at a lost of words...your an amazing poet.. just amazing!

  Successful
10/28/09 (11:45 PM) 
dam bro this was simply deeply written loved the back ground you took me on a jorney in tthis poem

  blakkrose
10/28/09 (11:38 PM) 
Oh my....this....was simply....poetry, beautifully written, profoundly executed and of course words chosen for this further emphasize the meaninq behin dmeaninq of this subject. *siqh*, oh my have we still a lonq way to qo for vanishinq the hman quality to kill , what is the truth, reject it's advances and what not. We have such a lonq way to qo, but we've come far from what use to be.

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