GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Forum
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow Shira's PREVIOUS POEM Shira's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"Help."
  by Shira


I'm never one to ask for help,
But this time I am begging.
Never one to admit I'm wrong,
But this time I am yelling.
I need some one to help me out.
I'm stuck where I am
I havent chosen the right route.
I'm starting to hear shit.
I'm starting to lose it.
Pick me up some one cause I can't stop falling.
Does any one hear my calling?
I'm yelling, screaming, crying out for some one.
Any one, help me! What have I done?
What have I done to deserve all this?
I swear I'm more than just clueless.
My hands are tied and my eyes are blind.
Wanna start running and leave my whiole life behind.
But can I face what's ahead of me in my path?
Am I prepared to either rise up
Or just fall on my ass?
I need your help to catch me when I fall
Listen to me when I"m crying
And hold me up so I can stand tall.
I'm afraid of losing my will and I'm afraid of losing my way.
I just need some one to tell me that it will all be okay.
© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Sep 20, 2007 (07:49 PM)
search icon
Viewed: 54 times
user icon
Rating: Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 (815 Points)
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 0 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
 
key Log In to rate this poem or add it to your favorites.
 



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  Syndel
09/21/07 (08:05 PM) 
very good love the ending its okay you know I will say it lol.... very honest and can feel the help being needed very tight I enjoyed

  Artgirl567
09/21/07 (08:02 PM) 
Hey i liked this one you goot made skills the flow was crazy keep up the good work........this is a perfect ten

  drzprincess
09/20/07 (08:11 PM) 
dis was real nice

  poet master ak...
09/20/07 (08:00 PM) 
That was cool can you check out mine the name of it is Imagine........ i really like ur poem (^-^)

Page(s): 1 
key Log In to rate or comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow Shira's PREVIOUS POEM Shira's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy