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"Help Save Us"
  by Delores


The world is a black hole. In dyer need of help.
The bums on the street is lookin for a place to sleep.
The people in uniform hold guns at airports to protect us from nothing the world has to offer.
Im looking for peace in this world we call home.
I would rather live on the edge of the planet searching for my soul
Not smoking crack and weed behind the bathroom stall.
Not drinking my life away, giving kids to unprotected services.
Or throwing every thing away like garbage on Sundays.

The world is a black hole in dyer need of help.
The situation is soo out of control
The government cant do nothing but sit back on there asses and greet, meet the press .
Its all the same in each of our lives, You must confess.
We sit back like nothings wrong.
Live our lives headstrong.
Come out of hiding from our houses as we sit back,
Enjoying our “ future distractions” TV’s MP3’s, Computers.
Life is hard if your controlled by this outrageous century.
As William Butler Yeats said “things fall apart the center cannot hold.”

The world is a black hole in dyer need of help.
This world is full of darkness sadness of guilt.
Help this world become a better place today
Give peace in the middle east and food to the poor.
Shelter to the homeless. Hiding places to wives who get abused.
Each day the black hole gets bigger and were not noticing
How big its actually getting.

The world is a black hole. In dyer need of help…
Who will save us?..
Will you ?..
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Date Submitted: Apr 23, 2008 (10:19 PM)
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  BoySoDef
12/01/08 (05:34 PM) 
i love yo thesis... your word usage and placement...Nice

  Ms. Smith
12/01/08 (05:10 PM) 
real and honest. i loved your concept. keep em comin ma.

  OGSoldier4God
11/23/08 (06:06 PM) 
we had better all do something for ourselves rather than wait on others to do it. this country would rather help other countries for the publicity than to end poerty here! good write though! i give it an 8!

  Fly Lyricist
11/10/08 (10:55 PM) 
Im feekin this peice, this world is so crazy and it really needs to change and we all need to work together to change it.Anyway, this is Great write.keep it up 10starz

  DeepThinker7
10/09/08 (07:04 PM) 
This work speaks to reality and is truly a masterful work to read! You definitely tied in a lot of current events to express your feelings in this work. Keep speaking the truth!

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