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"Her Despair"
  by Mr. DID


Her hand rest upon her drenched hands bearing each of her tears
As she silently dies inside over the seemly unhappy years
She doesn’t seethe use anymore of trying to fight a useless fight
Innocently conceiving doubtful thoughts without any help in sight
Her batter and bruised mind, fragile to the world around her
Incased in with dreadful nightmare
Scratching away at her sanity
Leaving her with divine terror
Not even her dreams preserve a happy image
Falling to her untimely demise and there is nothing to give here leverage
She’s slowly drowning herself in pity blaming herself for her pain
Sinking deeper and deeper into a pool of problems silently becoming insane
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Date Submitted: Apr 22, 2009 (04:51 PM)
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  stricklyfromth...
04/27/09 (11:12 AM) 
you almost depressed me.... but it was deep for real i can relate

  Terrence LeSur...
04/26/09 (09:46 PM) 
awww this is so depressing

  Moey
04/26/09 (09:20 PM) 
deep. nice

  akire
04/26/09 (09:15 PM) 
this is very deep. it got to me cause it reminded me of myself the phase i was going through. great write keep it up definitely a 10.

  datboyjada
04/26/09 (09:10 PM) 
alot of skilled expressed in this drop. hard to believe u only 18 my nigga. like the 3 things elite d mention u def expressed those feeling in this poem.

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