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"Her Last Friend. The point of change."
  by Crazy Baby


Here goes another day
With that smile
You know the one
Where every things breaking down inside her
All her walls crumbling
All her tears falling
You just can't see them
Cause she hides them away
From the world
Scared that her problems will stray
And then, who will she have?
Misery by her side like a loyal friend through hard times
Only she doesn't see
What the misery is doing to her
Eating her away
This is the point of no change
No way back, no help
She just has to put these problems
On her shoulders
And wait.
For that time she's alone
And then she can let it all go

Cry them tears
Shed them, one after the other
But still no change

Her hearts still heavy
Know she knows what to do
The only thing left
Only power left in her chest

She heaves her self of the floor
And grabs her razor
She holds it tight and closes her eyes
The hardest thing shes ever done

She throws her last friend out the window
A flash of silver as it drops in to the grass

Slowly she starts to feel better.
At last.
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Date Submitted: Sep 17, 2007 (08:32 PM)
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  somberangel
04/27/08 (10:57 PM) 
i luv it! kip it up!

  Disoriented Di...
10/14/07 (08:37 PM) 
WOW...this is sooo...painful...i am amazed....at the pain in this...how difficult...it must be..

  Shaded eyes
09/30/07 (03:01 AM) 
wow that was soo good. you seem so much happier now. i love u xx

  Aleks
09/24/07 (10:41 AM) 
:O WHOA!!!!! This was BRILIANT!!!! I just wish it is as easy as you makeit sound!!! But neverless THIS IS REALLY BRILIANT!!!!! 10 stars!!!

  Jez
09/19/07 (10:35 PM) 
bravo awesome work. keep it going.

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