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"her lyfe {god saved it }"
  by ms.mistaken


momma cusses and hit
because she couldnt get a hit
i remeber when she was so beautyful
but now she looks like shyt is what my daddy said
but i didnt agree beacuse that is my mother and she will always remain
beautyful to me even tho she sprung out and i know she was wrong i never
said a word ..i just workd to get us throw did hair in the back of the school
but that wasnt enought to get us throw lights went off more bills came to momma lost her job i droped out of school police say were's ya daddy i dont even know that dude then i started meeting dudes then i met this one dude
he turned me back in to school ....i even been to his place had a lot of people
their singing "amazeing grace" .......he also taught me these new words to say so im on my knees like everyday saying ......
{thank you god for showing me another day }

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Date Submitted: Jul 18, 2008 (12:00 AM)
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  asia nicole
07/24/08 (01:34 PM) 
dis was beautiful...n had emotion. great write. 10 starz.

  S.O.G.
07/21/08 (10:30 PM) 
indeed god will save your life, when you believe in him, you'll be saved from any situation, no matter how hard it seems, god is the hero of the world, and im one of his faithful sidekicks, living life through him, diggin the soulful vibe my fellow poet

  DstarCaliStyle
07/21/08 (04:15 AM) 
dammmmmmmm, you really have a way of saying things that is right to the point and still gets a strong message across 10strz.

  Thug poeit Tir...
07/20/08 (06:47 PM) 
yah i feel u on dis one

  taste of reali...
07/20/08 (02:15 PM) 
sorri bout the past babe... u did great on this... 10strz.. keep ur head up and keep writin...

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