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"Her"
  by The Hood Poet


In my dreams
I see her perfectly sculpted silhouette
Then wake up in the morning knowing
Thats the closest to heaven I am going to get

In my dreams I couress her beautiful skin of bronze and
Get lost in her eyes of ebony, Then wake up wondering if she was real and
looking back at me.

As I gaze out my window at the heavens,
For hours on in, hoping that I get granted that blessing

That blessing of having her unique love until the end of time, and As it grows better with time, like a fine wine with a banquet of passion we shall dine
So refined, as I tour the contours of the metaphysical aspects of her love, because the connection we have is deeper than physical. Its so monumental like we are one and she is a part of my mental, and therfore if she should fall to my well being it would be detrimental. Her presence is melodic like the tune to your favorite soothing instrumental.

Her stares make my pound like drum snares
Sassy, her style jazzy and savy that makes my other senses shout out how trumphets blare. She can give many men the blues with her tools, but to build me up and tear me down that would not be fair.

But then again I wouldn't mind because for one moment I got to be in her
angelic glare.
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Date Submitted: Feb 28, 2008 (08:26 PM)
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Date: 09/28/08 (12:52 AM)
Author: buddrfli
Poem Title: HIM

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  Divine Beauty
12/02/08 (07:45 PM) 
beautiful. dats all i can say. cuz im speechless. definately a fav. God bless.

  Truessence4u
09/30/08 (04:03 PM) 
You got ur point across, great use of visionary and imagery and the message is so clear..about "HER" i felt that i was there with you all seriously nicely done and u sculpted a masterpiece here! ten stars of course! Great metaphoric language, diction or style, creativity, and I love the uniqueness...The title is ordinary but simply beautiful to the whole passage of the story..You know how to connect with your readers!

  buddrfli
09/28/08 (12:40 AM) 
This poem has the potential to be a classic...Jus my opinion...but if you re-work the stanza's and break them up into to shorter ones, so the reader can read them the way you want them said...I think it would work better...Really is a lovely piece...Ur genuine talent is very evident...Sophia

  Arcane
09/25/08 (04:14 PM) 
Awww.. This is so beautiful, sad, and heartfelt.. The way you put your words together, it's amazing.. I mean you really feel your emotions pouring out on this piece..

  poet skylove b...
06/15/08 (12:07 AM) 
wow that was truly wonderful 100 stars, I love your style, your smooth flow and your amazing wordplay , this poem is real, with lots of passion, love,and emotions a fav for me, amazing job poet keep it up !!!!!!!!

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