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"Her Sanctuary [ThugLuv Poetry Challenge]"
  by Group: ThugLuv Poetry


- Shadowed Thoughts


*A Pic is Worth 1,000 Words Challenge*

Passing through long and darkly-lit corridors, He travels
In search to find her beauty, and she…

Is found dwelling within the shadows of night’s daylight
In pure bliss
As she finds utter solace in the expansive presence of the dark
She remains the queen of her domain
Left undisturbed and alone
Yet never lonely for her home
It is her paradise and her paradise is painted black
There to dwell in days in and nights with windows open
Allowing only ever the moonlight to shine upon her face
For all else this keeps her protected from the world’s disgusting disgrace
She finds solace in her darkened sanctuary.

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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2008 (11:58 AM)
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  Swallowed Scro...
12/03/08 (06:07 PM) 
i like the turn you went with this...i was wondering who would take it and what their approach would be...to be honest with you, i was quite...indecisive about sharing this picture because i love it so and wanted to use it but i love your interpretation and i love that it was you mama. Anyone that knows me knows my love for anything fantastical...LOTR, Wheel of Time, DragonLance Chronicles- the list goes on and by golly that's a long list lol and so i this image is very dear to me and i love tha...
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  piss a mofo of...
12/03/08 (12:31 PM) 
that backdrop is a beautiful piece of architecture as this scribe was a perfectly crafted piece

  ~Unpredictable...
12/03/08 (12:03 PM) 
I had a feeling who ever took that pic.. would go gothic..this is good...I wanted tot ake it but I woulda went a lil too deep with mines

  .:I WILL NOT B...
12/03/08 (12:01 PM) 
i could've taken this pic in many different directions but this is where my mind was at when I wrote this off the top of my head. although I truly don't think it does the pic complete justice for this is an extremely captivating and beautiful image.

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