Dreams are the only place where we will be suspended forever in time yet like life they end too fast. Ehhh I believe that we are born to do what we can with the time given and then die to become part of the bigger picture. Now don't mistake the fact that I took this position on this poem and overlooked the rest. Its just the first three stanzas stood out to me and by the end I realized you went somewhere else. But my mind was still stuck on those stanzas. Get me? Its kinda hard to explain n I th... [+]more
Dreams are the only place where we will be suspended forever in time yet like life they end too fast. Ehhh I believe that we are born to do what we can with the time given and then die to become part of the bigger picture. Now don't mistake the fact that I took this position on this poem and overlooked the rest. Its just the first three stanzas stood out to me and by the end I realized you went somewhere else. But my mind was still stuck on those stanzas. Get me? Its kinda hard to explain n I think I've rambled enuff. Much love mami [-]collapse
Wondering if I have already responded on this scribe....I think I have but if not.....just blew me away.... miss lady we have to get together soon on our collabo.. I dunno what it will be on...Any ideas??? oh yeah and can you go by and check out this piece for me..."My Boy's a MAN!!" is the title..
this piece is beyound words....as crazy as it may sound sometimes when don't wan't to be awaken from of our dreams. They become our hope and keeps us going to escape the coldness of reality. And when yesterdays become to painful to remember and tomorrows look too far you just have to live and enjoy the moments for here and now. peace
Such a song eh...every one has the right to dream...and reality has the right to impose itself upon the dreamer...in light of the negative that some how provides a positive...at the end of it all...love suffers not...
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