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"HERE TODAY, gone tomorrow"
  by BMSN


If I seperate from you today
What will I do next
Where will I go
Will I make it alone
Will I survive without everything you've given me the last 4 years
Please don't look at me differently
Don't say we bever could have made ir anyway
Its just that right now you're not good for me
Or was I no good for you
Either way its over
Don't you dare offer me money to come back
Or promise you'll take me to beautiful countries
The last four years have been so rocky
We've had so many ups and downs
It wierd though
At first I was so in love with you
Now I have nothing but hate
What happened
Weren't we happy
Well I was
I remember I wanted to do everything I could for you once
But you fucked that up so bad
Tomorrow I leave
Today I just wanted to say goodbye
When I say I honestly won't miss you
I mean it
October 5, 2009 I left you.....
The military.......
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Date Submitted: Sep 15, 2009 (08:20 AM)
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  rellepooh
09/24/09 (10:44 AM) 
damn thats deep, i feel the anger boo, keep up the good work

  Μz Ρ...
09/22/09 (03:54 PM) 
Powerful words! Get them before they get you xx

  glammm1
09/20/09 (01:32 PM) 
So happy for you! No place for anybody's child to be! Congrats!

  Moni J
09/17/09 (10:06 AM) 
nice rite. i left dec 3,2008...it was rotc granted but i still feel you.

  carmelcoatedla...
09/16/09 (10:00 AM) 
Damn, thats a griping reality

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