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"Hesitance"
  by A.C.H.


“I would have said something sooner but I was afraid that you would say no.”
This was a comment uttered by a young lady I adored in my younger day.
While I was not too direct about my feelings I tried to let her know I cared another way.

Each and every day we grew closer and closer as days and weeks passed.
I felt that I should tell her how I felt because I at least wanted our friendship to last.
I HESITATED.
My departure was nearing and I wished her a fond farewell.
But as to my feelings for her, though I did not tell.

I will always remember what she said as I begun to go.
“I would have said something sooner but I was afraid that you would say no.”
SHE HESITATED.
WE HESITATED
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Date Submitted: Jul 15, 2008 (11:04 AM)
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  Raxxie
07/15/09 (06:50 PM) 
damnit i hate that! the theme of this poem is the bane of my existence, no lie.. this is such a good poem and insanely close to home... so easy to relate to.. 10 stars

  คว...
07/08/09 (10:54 AM) 
and the fear of rejection bites again...he is a nasty little sucker aint he....i think everyone will relate to this atleast one point in their lives..i think we have all been here...they always say "a closed mouth dont get fed" great write :)

  Traxler
07/07/09 (12:29 AM) 
Short, but powerful. really creates an image kind of like a movie scene. The title is wonderful as well. amazing

  M.B.S.
06/28/09 (08:09 PM) 
thats it im convinced you are 1 of the best writers...mos definitely hav 2 put u as 1 of my fav poets

  Μz Ρ...
06/20/09 (10:47 AM) 
Nice write I can def relate.. You hesitated .. we hesiated.. and theres no tommorow! but you hold the beautiful memory of what if.. which can be so warming xxx

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