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"Him Hurting(Him)"
  by One







Him hurting, hating
heartbroken, headless, hopeless
life living love's left

lifeless, heartless left
alone life death's loving depth
destroying ditch's

doubting loves dating
bitches debating hating
her halfassed hiding

heart hurt feeling hard
head leaping out from liquid
love doubting loving

leaving her alone
evil enveloping eve
easily emptied


-reflect-


emptied easily
eve enveloping evil
alone her leaving

loving doubting love
liquid from out leaping head
hard feeling hurt heart

hiding halfassed her
hating debating bitches
dating loves doubting

ditch's destroying
depth loving death's life alone
left heartless, lifeless

love's left living life
hopeless, headless, heartbroken
hating, hurting Him
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Date Submitted: Apr 02, 2008 (07:28 AM)
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  LadyMay16
04/03/08 (05:27 PM) 
*hug you*...damn you were just in morning bliss now i read this..I dont get it...ugh...lemme go write something now

  heaviness
04/02/08 (10:19 PM) 
poet words like this -- should come with a per hour charge -- doctor one -- nice write

  b3yond r3d3mpt...
04/02/08 (10:05 PM) 
damn bruh dis was sum really deep type shit i feelz you on dis bruh straight fire and the word play was untouchable on dis piece i felt the emotions on this one flow from start the finish overall one of the better pieces ive seen from you 10s

  Syndel
04/02/08 (09:46 PM) 
Damn One are you okay over there its really not a long drive to get to you we could get a cup of something to cheer you up now I am sad

  Yas
04/02/08 (08:09 PM) 
damn one get the fuck outta my head feels like you took these thoughts straight outta my head and instead put it in a males perspective LOVE this gotta fav it

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