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"Hip-hop"
  by Rayve
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Hip Hop by Allidoiswrite82


Take down the APB i know Hip hop's location
Its in a ultra secret location
d it's waiting for this shit to pass
When music means more than shakin ur ass
I'm just a young kid how could I possibly know
The interworkings oh hip-hop.. and how things should go
You can thank my parents (Clifford N. and Tyra P.)
For showin me what urban music should be
I know all about Sugar Hill Gang and N.W.A
Run D.M.C and how they "Rock this way"
EMPD, The Fresh Prince and DJ Jazzy Jeff
All about Def Jam before "So So Deff"
I'm still "lookin for the perfect beat"
While I'm chillin at "The Show"
"Pushin on the breaks" When I'm wit Kurtis Blow
Laughin at the Fat Boys when I watch Krush Groove
Teachin my brother how to Pop- Lock and how a B-boy moves
Sometime Hip-hop shows his face tho
You can hear him when you listen to Lupe Fiasco
Now I'm not claimin to be the Hip-Hop Rosetta Stone
I hold Hip-hop in my heart so I know it's not gone!
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Date Submitted: Mar 29, 2008 (12:55 PM)
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  Lynx
04/26/08 (05:53 PM) 
damn im speechless, sick flow

  nzancyhou
04/21/08 (01:50 PM) 
i love this poem! usually when people talk about hip hop and how it has changed... etc, they usually just complain and set this bad vibe, but you give hip hop a great vibe that sounds motivational for someone to listen to music back in the days or the people that do it right. 10 stars to you!

  Street_patienc...
03/31/08 (12:46 PM) 
This is wats up i gotta lil chill goin on after readin dis i love hiphop and i believe dats where you gotta keep it 1,000,000 starz

  Eyeperceive
03/30/08 (12:48 PM) 
WOw.. I am really feeling this piece. I love to have you recite this on my blogtalkradio show. For the entire month of April we are discussing Hip Hop....if you are interested send me a shout out Eyeperceive@aol.com peace

  BIG CHIEF
03/30/08 (10:19 AM) 
i feel you on that right there...hiphop is not dead yet..but it been in a few major injuries though..like crank dat superman,batman, spongebob,aquaman, and more...but back to the comment ...concept awsome..your flow was awsome....everything was hott...ten starz and a fav ..peace and hair grease

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