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"His Back"
  by BlessedOne




I stand behind him with my head lying upon his back
My eyes are closed and enjoying love
Arms looped round his defined waist
Hands settled upon my favorite place

-But-

His back is my focus
Strong and courageous
Hairless, smooth, and muscle bound
A back that knows the value of hard labor
A back that has bore many burdens
A back that has fought and won many battles


I leave one hand in paradise allowing
it’s partner to run fingers through his hair
now the other hand is jealous
because his head is a place of comfort

-But-

His back is my focus
Broad like a boat’s sail blowing in the wind
Brown like the color of polished bronzed wood
A back of noble, born of kings and queens
A back that has driven me to ecstasy many nights
A back that has pulled me out of turmoil’s trap

I softly stroke his lips that constantly bring pleasure
Feeling a grin form in the corners
I caress his wide nose of royalty
Wondering what those beautiful eyes see

-But-

His back is my focus
So………
That is
Where I
Leave
My kiss
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Date Submitted: Apr 18, 2009 (03:09 PM)
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  BrEeZyWrOtE
11/07/09 (02:19 PM) 
Geeze where did you find a guy with a back like that cuz I want one just like this lol. You are an esquisite writer. You just leave me in awe. Wonderful. I can't believed I missed this one waay back when...

  UnigueiZme
11/07/09 (01:22 PM) 
I like it...

  after vision
04/29/09 (06:57 PM) 
this is so hot in so many ways my poet -- thanks for the visual that was sent and recieved

  searchin lyfe ...
04/19/09 (12:53 PM) 
are you talking about me..lol...Im blushing...naw..Im just playing...this was hot. A man loves a woman that does those things even when he dont look like he wants it. trust me..A perfect picture painted here..keep it up mami

  mikeb30
04/19/09 (12:20 PM) 
beautifully pic painted...comforting write

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