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"His Ecstasy"
  by KrazySexiiKool
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Inside of You by JayLegit


the sweetness of his honeydew spreading sensuously across my lips
tongue movin in a musically floetic rhythym with my hips
hand strokin and probin the most sensitive place on his body
bitin down on his juicy lips trying so hard not to call out for me
hands gently caressing my head swimming smoothly through my hair
i can sense his build up, his climax, my "suga daddy" almost there
the pressure from my cheeks and the wetness from my tongue
sends a force so melodically intense strong enough to make him cum
he was inside of me, anxiously waitin to take his turn
to release his creamy butter into me to ease the burn
the burning desire to love, to please, aiming to fulfill me
so he came....and came hard....and he fell gently asleep like a baby

aren't you glad you had your turn ;)
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Date Submitted: Mar 04, 2008 (12:13 AM)
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  Scottie-b
03/10/08 (02:01 AM) 
yo this is hot kinda got to me if you know wut i mean, lol, but this a hot write all imma say is ten tarz

  Thuggishkewtie
03/08/08 (10:57 PM) 
I have to LOL first cuz this one line caught me off guard b4 I could finish:"to release his creamy butter into me to ease the burn"...first thought was oooo no thats not good and then when I finished I was like oooo nm......that is tru wat u said tho alot of females dont lik writin about goin down..nice piece

  mindigoblue
03/08/08 (12:19 PM) 
Aww shucks now! Go on wit ya bad ass! You are a master of well constructed responses! You did this one so smoothly and it flowed like water. Wonderful!

  devryck101
03/08/08 (09:58 AM) 
aaaahh that was a killer response...you get mad erotic stars from me..lol..

  JayLegit
03/05/08 (03:38 AM) 
ACTUALLY... WHAT ARE WE WAITING FOR MAMA? WE SHOULD ALREADY BE MAKING THIS SHIT A COLLABO.. WE FINNA TAKE THIS EROTIC POEM TO ANOTHER LEVEL YADIG? LET'S DO IT.

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