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"His life"
  by Nikki_18


He makes me feel special...like i matter....like im alive.
he knows exactly what to say an makes all my troubles go away.

I know, i know...dis sounds like the typical love poem....so lets switch it up.

His love his touch his kiss.....takes me high above the sky the clouds the stars.
His voice his eyes his presence....put butterflies....in my stomach so many that it flutters and flutters.

His mind his heart his soul.....like no other he makes me lose...control in my mind...nothing is close to imperfection when im in his arms.

His words his lyrics his song.....unforgettable, i cant get it out of my head...embedded in my mind for ever in years to come....the track plays..

His life his journey his obstacle...inspiring, nothing at all is like it....i see him i see strength i see growth.....i see mending wounds, a heart broken...death brought upon a deep tissue scar.....still healing and processing the emotions in which he is feeling.

His life his pain his tears......topped off by me and a curse....i beg it all away.....from me, my mind....i wish i never....i wish i hadnt....

His love his heart...him....i cherish 4 always......i adore.....his life.
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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 (02:24 PM)
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  tanquilla
07/28/08 (04:12 PM) 
well damn....lol thats some rute stuff right there..lol..damn thats how i feel about my baby...lol...much love..god bless...peace ♥ TQ

  9HANTOM
07/24/08 (12:11 AM) 
''''''''''''''''''''''''''''NO HOMO'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

  9HANTOM
07/24/08 (12:08 AM) 
I HAVE NEVER FELT LUV LIKE THIS B4 ..LOL GR8 WRITE POET... WE GOT SUM NU FYRE ON GS NOW!!!!!!!!!

  Chocolate City
07/23/08 (08:56 PM) 
i love seein all these love poemz lol.. i feel u on this one.. its heart felt.. like ur in a fairytale with white clouds and concrete roses.. 10starz

  touchdapearl2
07/23/08 (02:59 PM) 
girl i have felt love this deep....and my favorite line is when you said his words,his lyric's,and his song as if someone asked what do you love about him,hot write

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