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"HIS mysterious ways"
  by Sunkissed25


my neighbor called
she wants to borrow a book
she lives to eat but she can't cook
she eats at my house some nights
her husbands death is still fresh
all his things are loudly in sight
some saturdays we meet for karoke
she claims she hates blacks but she love me
she don't see it but the good lord is bringin her to her knees
so she can recognize the source of quenching all her needs
she don't know it but she'll find her first friendship in sunkissed me

she drinks and gets way to comfortable venting to me
nigger slipping threw ignorant lips
its fine i brush her ignorance off as blind
i pity the gorgeous combustions that don't reach it to her mind
worlds and dreams go on gleaming
her thinking prehistoric
it goes no further then ships reaching the edge of the sea and crashing
no adventure past the horizon
she's a boxed mind of southern rebel flag teaching
but right now shes at my knees weeping
finding just what she's needing for her spritual healing
in me
her black neighbor across the street
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Date Submitted: Nov 06, 2009 (06:31 PM)
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  floatingonthev...
11/12/09 (07:00 PM) 
ooh this is fire, especially the ending, "her black neighbor across the street".. forreal.. why can't people get that old southern bullshit attitude out of here, i am so ashamed that i am white and white people are so ignorant.. ignorance runs in every single race but I am so tired of all the ignorance towards black people, seriously.. I think any other race that has been subjected to so much hate would be just as pissed.. no other race has been truly hated like black people... it's sad to me, a...
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  Lyrical Dragon
11/08/09 (05:38 PM) 
Great poem. It must be such a awkward situation for you. I can't believe she said she hates blacks. Crazy. I give you big props for keeping your cool.

  G.A.
11/08/09 (03:07 PM) 
Bravo!! Such strenght you show for caring for this "ignorant" neighbor for slippin up sayin "nigger". You showed patience, strength, showin you cared, and you kept a leveled head in this and if this is true then my hats off to you too! Great Write

  The Clinician
11/07/09 (10:48 AM) 
Nice scribe with an evening better message. Getting to know a person past pigmentation is key if we're ever to make progress in today's society. You were a very good samaritan for doing whatcha did and I commend you. I know it took a lot of patience for you to deal with that.

  Advocate
11/06/09 (06:54 PM) 
i can most certainly say that this poem speaks to me and gives mixed emotions. at first, i can not properly express my admiration i see in you for putting up with such ignorance. but then at the same time, i can see a devine touch given to her through your companionship. in her, i see somone trapped in ways that aren't even their own. for if she truthfully felt so negatively in her prejudices, a friendship would never come to pass. the person inside her leaks out from your friendship. the world ...
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