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"His Paradise"
  by Poohbabi2010


Bring me to his paradise
a feeling of within,
naked to his loving eyes
caressing me with sin
I long to feel his softest kiss
upon my dampened skin

Bring me to his paradise,
and let our bodies meet
the trickle of the rain outside
would shower us with heat,
I wish to be his fantasy
and make our love complete.
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Date Submitted: Jun 09, 2007 (08:53 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (14)
  AjaLuv
12/24/08 (02:45 PM) 
i loved it..good write! its short, sweet and to the point... its a 10 !

  iva
05/29/08 (12:19 PM) 
well written.

  SpitFire
05/29/08 (12:12 PM) 
Real sweet ma.

  PoeticSoulja
12/21/07 (06:55 PM) 
The way you wrote this poem is nothing more than beautiful.Such a lovely short and sweet piece of work.Erotic but not to explicit though.Very great job on making this piece.Keep up the good work.Ten stars

  S.O.G.
06/15/07 (07:11 PM) 
mmm lovin tha sweet taste of pleazure,10starz hunni dis one made me fantazize

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