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"HIS STORY..."
  by TheLastDon


*His story*

This is a story about a man i know...

He was born an inmate,
born broke into a broken family,
inmate from the start,
all alone in this life of misery...

He keeps a poker face his whole life,
no daddy around,
so his only guide in life is his thug heart,
right or wrong it"s all he gat...

No one can understand him,
his pride is keeping him alive through the years,
but he"s hurt inside,
i can see it his eyes...

He"s trapped in this misery,
can"t go on,
so he breaks down and falls to the ground,
all alone,
no one can see him cry...

But he crys tears of pain,
i can see it in his eyes,
i see it everytime i look in the mirror...

This is a story abot a man i know...

*TheLastDon*
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Date Submitted: Sep 27, 2006 (02:00 PM)
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  DADDY RAGG
08/02/07 (07:35 AM) 
Deep and heartfelt piece 10* keep em coming looking forward to reading more of your work

  Conceited252
07/28/07 (06:18 AM) 
That's deep. Born an inmate....powerful words...keep doing your thang

  Jez
07/28/07 (05:49 AM) 
the line " I see it everytime I look in the mirror" Been there done that know how he is feeling. I was not born an inmate but I know the feeling of dispare. Shit 10 stars arent enough

  Thray-Thug
11/17/06 (11:40 PM) 
I feel tha pain of that man u know great poem

  Meko
11/09/06 (09:38 AM) 
This is whats up, very indepth.

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