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"Hitman: Family That Slays Together..."
  by Greg Gatsby
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Hitman: Mr Blue Tie & Jade by Greg Gatsby


Ten years pass almost effortlessly
And the worlds top two assassins
Living under the same roof
Two very opposite personas
Working in harmony
Mr Blue Tie is passive, patient, stable, introverted
Jade is more explosive, impulsive, cocky, optimistic
Which explains why Mr Blue Tie prefers snipers and silencers
To Jades assault rifles and bombs
She idolized him and he adored her
But they will never admit it
Mr Blue Tie can kill a man without ever being in the same room
But doesnt understand teenage girls
And she will never understand how a professional killer
Can care for a little girl

'Ive made dinner for you' says Mr Blue Tie
She hugs him and says thank you
He still doesnt hug back
She is used to it
'Will you tell me your real name today?'
'No' he says bluntly
Its a game she plays, trying to pry into his mind
With no success
'Why did you take me with you that day?'
'Finish your dinner we have a big day tomorrow'
Says Mr Blue Tie, avoiding at all cost a conversation
As to why he made a job personal
Breaking the cardinal rule for assassins

'The Atlas Group is pleased with your skills
You will be the youngest agent at fifteen'
Jade could hardly contain herself
All she ever wanted was to be an agent
Its easy when the one teaching you
Is the best of the best
'Your first assignment is this week
With my supervision of course'
'I sure hope its my math teacher' Jade jokes
Mr Blue Tie hates jokes
'Meeting with Mother Bird is 8am sharp
And remember, each muzzle flash means
One less evil in the world'
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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2009 (10:03 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/02/09 (03:39 PM)
Author: Greg Gatsby
Poem Title: Hitman: Carl The But...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  kiler who?
10/30/09 (10:20 AM) 
well done man i like this poem sweet execution.

  Lady_Style
10/30/09 (07:03 AM) 
Another addition to the hitman collection...me likey likey...This one reminds me of that film Leon...keep em comin greg but if u assasinate me nxt imma come bk for ya LOL. Nicely penned xx

  Showcase
10/30/09 (03:30 AM) 
you still pull me in I kind of had a feeling that she was up next, but I wanted to wait assumptions can kill a good story. You've master this write as well I'm pleased to read more. pEACE.elevate

  dagirl2fly4hat...
10/29/09 (10:40 PM) 
this was different I dig the flow, it was deep, and good

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