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"HIV"
  by L.edwards


Im sorry for misleading you is what she said
he told her her sorrys aint matter he was still gon bust her head
she met him at a store
he gave her friendship a smile and much more
but instead of being the good girl he was seeking
she acted as a whore
fuckin anyone knoakin at her door
wit no rubber no protection jus raw affection
little did these men kno she was infected
they come to her ready and shes easily pulling down her panties
neglecting important information
letting him contract her diases she doesnt care
he's running in and out of her completly bare
wait thats not even the worst part
he has another womans heart
laying in their home
thinking the one shes loves would never do her any harm
never that thought she was never alarmed
just wanted him to come home and climb inside his arms
but of her he thought nothing
while he had this beautiful brown eyed
woman laying naked in front of him shes so hot
she waiting for him to be heavly penatrading
he gets naked dick straight standing
he thinks fuckin her raw is okay cus she has no funny smellings
but hiv isnt easy to see obviously

Part two coming soon be lookin out!!
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Date Submitted: Mar 24, 2008 (02:19 PM)
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Date: 05/07/08 (08:45 AM)
Author: Arcane
Poem Title: HIV II

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  Luvlee
10/10/08 (02:29 PM) 
this is mad crazy because this is the truth too many people going around affecting people and then the innocent ones is getting jacked up because they thought their lover was real and truthful but instead was screwing around on them now they got a death sentence!!! Nice scribe thanks for making people aware!!!<3Luv

  YELLA
09/20/08 (12:05 AM) 
OMG! This is deep!

  Just_Jasmin
09/06/08 (01:44 PM) 
this is deep n so true...im sure it happens eeryday though....ikeep doin ya thang.....

  Complicated
09/06/08 (01:09 AM) 
mu cusin has full blown AIDS n she was purposely sprding it arund the dude found out n went after part of the family saying dat the whole family was going to pay since they knew wat she had n didnt tell him.he asked why was she going to the doctor so much n why is she sick all the time my aunt jus said she had heart problems.so sad

  alastor
08/26/08 (12:59 AM) 
I like this piece I've been lookin at a way to tackle such a contreversial issue. I'm glad you shed some light on such a shady subject. It afflicts more than we think. And it's so preventable. 10

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