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"Hold me down"
  by young lover


MY FARTHER WHICH ART IN HEVEN HOLY IS THY NAME... Please God my flesh needs to be tammed im sick in tierd of bieng of being sick in tierd i dont wanna be the same treating life as a game, im sure thats not what im post to do many times you deliverd me out of all my trials ive been through,you are so good but i do so much wrong how long will it take till i surrrender all to whom i belong, i want you i need you i cant be with out cause with out i would surely fall no doubt, the trend of life God i can not stay help me to break away, and I am Gods chosen no matter what has been told, so I have to be bold to break this strong hold, but God im not whorthy but you still love me in you said you will be with me through wuteva goes on, so let it be known that i am your son in I could never be bound, in there is somethin deep inside that i found. So God i just ask that you hold me down jordan.A.B
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Date Submitted: Mar 20, 2008 (09:49 PM)
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  TUANE
05/30/08 (12:41 PM) 
Loving this to the fullest! This here is a real spirutual wirte. "Hold Me down" that he will do. we all fall short of his glory. I know the feeling of being sick and tired of just being sick and tired. God puts us all through trials and tribulations. But he will neva put more on you than you can bear. As long as you keep ur faith in God, He will see you through anything. I know that we all are out here doing wrong, but we alll need to str8ten up. I know I do. I do wrong alot, But I know that I c...
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  Phinest
04/19/08 (07:57 PM) 
that was inspirational ii felt u frm beginning to end i love your work n how u worded seem like you meant business when u wrote it i felt your passion n indeed God will hold you down if u believe 10*

  lil'bitt
03/21/08 (01:27 PM) 
wow jordan you have gotten so much better i think this is your best work..omg wow this is very inspirational..great great work

  mstwest
03/21/08 (12:53 PM) 
that was very insparational, i love the way you worded it. hot. real hot. 10 starz. well deserved.

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